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mike23md
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ryknowssd
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Needs more depth, better blending, better lighting and a gmap or two. Damn fine start doe. I like the render efx and text fits well, too. Just seems unfinished. This could be your best if you keep at it and finish dis ish.
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El ramster
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| Posted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 4:57 am Post subject: |
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Effects are too strong. Darken the left.. Some stuff looks over contrasted.
The small text looks choppy/blurry/makes so sense.
Overall your best.
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