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mike23md
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 Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 8:28 am Post subject: dwayne bowe |
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Stone85
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| Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:06 pm Post subject: |
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Not a fan. Very overcontrasted and text is too focalized. Sorry man
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 6:07 am Post subject: Re: dwayne bowe |
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| mike23md wrote: | |
I'd totally wear that if it were darker
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Escobar.8
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| Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 3:58 pm Post subject: Re: dwayne bowe |
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| mike23md wrote: | |
It has potential.
the text is nice. Love the position and font .
IMO this is what I would do (assuming youre using photoshop):
 Lower the opacity of the yellow layer (i think its on pin light?); then selective erasing over some areas of the text and the player. You want the player to pop from the BG.
Add in a contrast/brightness adjustment layer to try and reduce the over-saturation. Play with the settings.
Add a charcoal gray/white gradient map. Put one on multiply (like 30% opacity) then another map on either Lighten or screen (again, low opacity)
Spot lighting: add a layer, fill it with black, put on screen, then with a soft brush on low opacity add some spots to help put more visual focus on the player. then play around with gaussian blur to even it out. .
I didnt go in depth because I dont think you know what your doing. But i just wanted to make sure my thoughts came across clearer. I hated when people would critique my work here back in the day and just write "Lighting" or "Text". Ish was rude and unhelpful.
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